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Immortality

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Immortality
    To live forever Past all brothers Past all sisters Past your mother Past your father Past all cousins Past all aunts & uncles Past all Grammas and Grandpas

Past all family

Immortality
    To live forever Past all friends Past all enemies Past all teachers Past all bosses Past all teammates Past all roommates Past all classmates Past all employees

Past everyone

Think about it
    No one can kill you But you You can kill them You can know Your soon-to-be Enemy's past Your enemy's kids Your soon-to-be Girlfriend's mom You can do all generations

Of your current girlfriend's girls

Doesnt that sound great?
    You can watch Your girl get old And soon die You can watch Your family die You can watch Everyone die

Doesnt that sound great?
I wrote this a while ago (maybe some months ago.)

Some people may think that immortality is the best thing that can happen. Open your eyes, you're watching everyone die. You're watching everyone age and reach the place that they're destined to be, meet the person their destined to see. But you can't get there.
It's not always all that bad, but it's not all that good.
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Immortality is better than being dead. When we fix the aging process more and more people will avoid this tragic fate. Sooner or later maybe your friends, family, coworkers, lovers...etc will change their minds and live indefinitely. Who knows what we'll accomplish in the future. Zoltan Istvan 2016!